ORIGINAL FORM:

Hello classmates! Today I'm gonna talk about something that I’d like to learn. When I was a child I wished learn a lot of sports, like to roller ,skate, to ski, etc., but I never learned anything because I notice that the sports aren't made for  me. Also I wanted to learn to play the piano, guitar and the drums, but I never practiced so I don’t know play any instrument.

About five years ago I was in a choir, and there I started to learn to sing, but I stop three or two years later because I didn't have time for practiced and for another problems . So I know how to sing a little bit (that doesn't mean that I sing very well :c).

In the present I would like to learn a lot of languages, as French, Italian, Arab, English and others. I will like to learn thing of everything (biology, physical, mathematics and of course society) I know this is difficult, but I hope someday achieve this. Now I paint with a lot of techniques and also I cook, but I will like to learn more of each.

One day my mom said to me that it is never too late for learn things, so I’m not despondent and I hope that you neither, it is all about practice and effort

 CORRECTION FORM:

Hello classmates! Today I'm gonna talk about something that I’d like to learn. When I was a child I wished learn a lot of sports, like to roller ,skate, to ski, etc., but I never learned anything because I notice T (noticed) that the sports aren't made for  WW (to) me. Also I wanted to learn to play the piano, guitar and the drums, but I never practiced so I don’t know play any instrument.

About five years ago I was in a choir, and there I started to learn to sing, but I stop three or two years later because I didn't have time for WW ( to) practiced T (practice)  and for another problems P . So I know how to sing a little bit (that doesn't mean that I sing very well :c).

In the present I would like to learn a lot of languages, as French, Italian, Arab, English and others. I will like WE (I would like) to learn thing of everything (biology, physical, mathematics and of course society) I know this is difficult, but I hope someday λ (to) achieve this. Now I paint with a lot of techniques and also I cook, but I will like WE (would like) to learn more of each.

One day my mom said to me that it () is never too late for learn things, so I’m not despondent and I hope that you neither, it () is all about practice and effort.